大師教你寫出一流英文求職信
寫英文求職信要注意的細節(jié)
寫求職信的目的在于獲得職位，一封 求職信 無論如何文辭并茂，令人心動，公司hr主管不見到應聘者本人是不會給予工作機會的。因此， 求職信 的實際目的在于獲得面談的機會。許多人都會copy網(wǎng)上的求職信范本，導致千篇一律，這是非常不可取的。我們已經(jīng)講過怎樣寫求職信，這次我們來談談求職信寫作中容易被忽略的細節(jié)問題。

　　一、求職信的第一段說明寫信的目的，有些專家認為不宜用分詞句子，比如用下面的句子做開頭，因為這樣的句子被人用得大多，顯得陳腐，失去特點。

　　replying to your advertisement...
　　answering your advertisement...
　　believing that there is an opportunity...
　　thinking that there is a vacancy in your company...
　　having read your ad...

　　再比較下面三組例句。每一組里面(1)句較差，經(jīng)過修改后(2)句顯得比較恰當。

　　a:
　　(1) replying to your recent advertisement in the boston evening globe, i wish to apply for the position of sales manager.

　　(2) i am applying for the position of sales manager. i believe my qualifications will meet your exacting requirements.

　　b:
　　(1) i believe after reading your advertisement in this morning''s journal that you are offering just the opportunity i am looking for.

　　(2) your advertisement in this morning''s journal for an adjustment manager prompted me to apply for this position.

　　c:
　　(1) having read your advertisement in the new york times for an accountant, i thought you might be interested in my application.

　　(2) in your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. please consider me an applicant for the position. here are my reasons for believing i am qualified for this work.

　　二、在提到希望得到的待遇時，可用類似的句子：

　　i''d prefer not to set a salary, but since you ask, i consider 6,500 a month to be satisfactory.

　　it''s hard for me to say what my salary should be set at, but if pressed i would have to ask for a month as an initial salary.

　　i don''t feel that i should set my own salary, as i am happy enough to have the privilege of working for you. 　　　　however, i would consider a month satisfactory compensation for my apprenticeship.

　　三、提起或要求待遇時不要過分謙虛或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用：

　　as for salary, i do not know what to say. would $4,500 a month be too much?

　　do you think i would be asking too much if i said 5,000 dollars a month?

　　you know what my services are worth better than i do. all i want is a living wage.

　　四、關于求職信的結尾用語，下面也有三組例句。每一組里面(1)句較差，經(jīng)過修改后(2)句顯得比較恰當。

　　a:
　　(1)軟弱、羞怯的： if you think i can fill the position after you have read my letter, i shall be glad to talk with you.

　　(2)改寫后（較佳）： if my qualifications meet your standards, i would be happy to speak with you in person.

　　b:
　　(1)懷疑，不妥、不安全的： if you are interested, please let me know immediately, as i''m sure an interview will convince you i''m the man for the job.

　　(2)改寫后：i would like to request an interview. you can reach me by telephone at beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening.

　　c:
　　(1) 哀求式的句子，不夠完整（漏掉面談時間）：i would appreciate the opportunity for an interview. i can be reached by calling beijing 12345678.

　　(2) 改寫后： may i have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? my telephone number is beijing 12345678. you can reach me between nine and five o''clock during the day.

教你寫出一流的英文求職信
在這個競爭日趨激烈的社會背景下，要想獲得你夢想中的工作機會光有一份內(nèi)容完整的 簡歷 還不足以打動老板的心，但若附加上一份引人注目的 求職信 正式介紹自己并展示你的價值就如虎添翼了，尤其是應聘外企的時候。開始動筆寫英文 求職信 之前，有一些比較實用的建議提供給你以供參考。

　　明確你的目標

　　直入主題，解釋你為什么寫這封 求職信 并說清楚你感興趣的職位頭銜。還可以順便提一下你是在哪兒獲悉這份工作的，讓對方對你的信息有一個整體了解："i am writing to express my interest in the sales manager position advertised on your web site. i have enclosed a copy of my resume for your review."

　　展示你的技能

　　求職信的關鍵目的在于向你的雇主證明你是最佳人選，因此確定該職位的技能要求是重要的第一步。然后，羅列出experiences make me an ideal candidate for this position." 你以前與之相關的工作經(jīng)歷，并最后以類似這樣的話總結："i am confident that these combined

　　思路清晰，短小精悍

　　寫求職信不是作文比賽，如果你的文筆一流，適當?shù)男揎椬匀粵]錯，但要避免華麗的口吻和冗長復雜的句子。思路清晰且短小精悍的句子最能直入人心。不要試圖用你太過于復雜的句子來讓人印象深刻，否則會讓讀者有疲勞和困惑感。

　　一個不想當將軍的士兵不是好兵

　　永遠記得你的任務是-推銷自己!盡可能描繪你對勝任這份工作的信心與能力："i strongly believe i possess the right combination of skills and experience you are looking for"

　　說了這么多，最關鍵的一點就是要put yourself in the employer''s shoes — 假設你自己就是老板，從這個角度出發(fā)來進行最后的梳理與校對工作。

　　你可以借助微軟的語法檢查工具先從頭至尾檢查一遍拼寫和語法錯誤，有可能的話，請你的知心好友幫你一起找找碴，總是有百益而無一害的。