中國這些年，經(jīng)濟發(fā)展迅速，國民生活水平提高，越來越有錢了，中國的國際地位和國際影響力也是越來越重，物質(zhì)水平提高了，人們就開始追求精神生活。于是許多人出國旅游或是留學(xué)。國外的教育制度，和生活環(huán)境相對中國要好一些，加上許多中國人在國外工作的，所以，出國留學(xué)越來越熱。

　　你知道美國研究生留學(xué)ps的六大失敗類型么?它們分別是重復(fù)簡歷型、學(xué)校介紹型、抄襲句式型、救世主型、猶抱琵琶型、言幼稚型。所以，為了不讓諸位童鞋在美國留學(xué)文書寫作過程中犯下錯誤，在今天的文章中，小編就來為您逐一介紹一番!速來圍觀!

　　一、重復(fù)簡歷型

　　I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in … in 2002 at … university

　　點評：美國研究生留學(xué)個人陳述不要去重復(fù)簡歷中的東西，這在很多學(xué)校的PS要求中明確提到，個人陳述的寫作要具體到事件上，事件解決上，而不要單純重復(fù)已有的內(nèi)容。

　　二、學(xué)校介紹型

　　I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China.

　　點評：該同學(xué)的美國研究生留學(xué)個人陳述開頭等于是一個申請學(xué)校的簡介，這好像是在幫助學(xué)校做宣傳，或表達你有多了解該學(xué)校，而不是寫個人陳述了。這是沒有意義的開頭，白白浪費了字數(shù)，最容易被秒據(jù)掉。

　　三、抄襲句式型

　　As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered undergraduate program. Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am more than greedy for something new.

　　點評：Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new 這種句式不知道是從哪里學(xué)到的，很多同學(xué)在用。但你要知道，老外最恨抄襲，最喜原創(chuàng)，所以利害關(guān)系大家想想吧。

　　四、救世主型

　　I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that. Since I was a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, "The world can be changed by man's endeavor, …

　　點評：一副救世主的形象，小時候就受富蘭克林的影響，立志改變世界。個人陳述的寫作一定要個人化具體化，別吹大牛，甚至帶著一種霸權(quán)主義思維。

　　五、猶抱琵琶型

　　Making a right decision at the right time is very important for a young people .At present, I have come to a critical point in my life when I have to make a decision concerning my future course of action. Only a perceptive understanding of oneself will enable one to chart his proper action. Aftercarefully thinking, reviewing my life and analyzing my personality, I make the determination and choose to apply for graduate study in XXX. And I choose to specialize in communications which I will pursue a lifelong career.

　　點評：重點放在自己要做重大決定上了，人生的轉(zhuǎn)折點，然后來上句所謂名言警句。浪費字數(shù)，有限的字數(shù)里，同學(xué)們應(yīng)該學(xué)會直接，并且抓住重點，突出自己最有優(yōu)勢的方面，最有特色的方面。

　　六、言幼稚型

　　'Why the gecko can climb on the wall while we can't-' 'Why the leaves turn red in autumn' 'How many stars are there in the sky-' When I was in childhood, I always kept asking my mom all kinds of questions。I am especially interested in how things work, I can even take apart things for several hours in order to find out its principle.

　　點評：上來就回憶童年少年自己如何有著遠大抱負，who cares。個人陳述字數(shù)有限，卻用這么多話描述童年，沒有任何意義。學(xué)校想知道你如何看待未來，而不是如何度過過去。