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1. When one have money he can do what he want to
(һXʲôʲô)onedžΔ(sh)˷Qhave(yng)Ğhas ;ͬwant(yng)Ğwantsǵ͵^һ
Ğ飺Once one has money he can do what he wants (to do)
Zeλ(Misplaced Modifiers)ӢZchZͬͬһZھӲͬλãӵĺx׃@һcЇW(xu)]ҕ˲Ҫ`1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus
betterλò(dng)(yng)ھĩ
Ӳ(Sentence Fragments)ڿZHpɽքZĵľȫԱиеĕZͲͬӽY(ji)(gu)˼_@Nrl(f)䌑ԺPЩafrl(f)
1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV radio newspaper and so on
벿֡for example by TV radio newspaper and so on һľHһЩB؞~Zܪɾ
Ğ飺There are many ways to know society for example by TV radio and newspaper
ҴZ(Dangling Modifiers)^ҴZָĶZcӵ߉P(gun)ϵy磺At the age of ten my grandfather died. @Сat the age of tenֻcʮqr]f lʮqrһmy grandfather ҂@ҴZ_һcȫͲôM
Ğ飺
When I was ten my grandfather died
1. To do well in college good grades are essential
вʽZ to do well in college ߉Z
Ğ飺
To do well in college a student needs good grades
~`(Misuse of Parts of Speech) ~`áF(xin)飺~(dng)~;~(dng)~;~(dng)~õ
1. None can negative the importance of money
negative ϵ~`~
Ğ飺
None can deny the importance of money
ָ(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)ָҪvǴ~cָ˻P(gun)ϵȺõĴ~һ¡ԇ@һ䣺
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid
(ҽҪãҪİ)x@һԒxߟo_ДλlY(ji)l(dng)҂иа`Ĵ~ָ_˼һĿȻ@ӿɸĞ飺
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid
1. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself
˷Q~we ͷ~yourselfָһ
Ğ飺
We can also know society by serving it ourselves
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1. There are many ways we get to know the outside world
@Ӱ˃Ɍ˼There are many ways ԼWe get to know the outside worldεذBһͲ(dng)
Ğ飺
There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.
There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world
~ë(Troubles in Diction)Diction ָضľm(dng)?sh)x~ZĆ}ڽ̌W(xu)rgo̎ƽr@滨ĕrgOޣӰˌW(xu)ڌЛ]B(yng)õõ(x)TSÁи~(dng)?sh)e`ȱȽǡ
1. The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution
(r(nng)I(y)滯W(xu)|(zh)ʹõIJҲȾ)@ȻobstaclesϵKϵK`substance|(zh)⡰the increasing use (ӵʹ) (yng)Ğ顰abusive use (E)
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The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution
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Education
assignment, homework ΄(w)ͥI(y)
required/compulsory courses, elective courses n;xn
children and youth/adolescent
adapt to sth./adjust oneself to sth./become accustomed to sth. m(yng)
segregate students ^(q)W(xu)
team spirit F
think independently ˼
students' feedback/input, W(xu)ķ
students appraise/evaluate their teachers' performanceW(xu)ώur
generalist, specialist, well-rounded/versatile ͨ;;Ŷˇ
humanities, social science, arts, science and engineering, basic science, applied science ;;ˇg(sh);Ƽ;A(ch) W(xu); (yng)ÿƌW(xu)
self-discipline Ҽs
interact, participation/involvement ;c
schooling, parenting, vocational education, curriculum όW(xu);ĸ;I(y);n
be proficient in, well-acquainted with, role-model, perform well in ڡ..
peer pressure, overprotective, frustration ͬ݅;^ȱo;
thought-provoking, enlightening, inspiring l(f)˼;ϵģl(f)
cultivate/foster/nurture B(yng)B(yng)
refreshing, uplifting, motivating ^ĵ
juvenile delinquency/youth crime, bully, truancy 그;;ӌW(xu)
impart/inculcate knowledge ֪R
instill high moral values ݔеĵ^
employable/marketable skills ͘I(y)
force-feed the students W(xu)
memorize for memorization's own sake ӛӛ
memorize equations, formulas, theorems and laws bʽՓͶ
follow sth. blindly/follow sth. indiscriminately äĿ;Ӆ^(q)ֵظ
extinguish/stifle/constrain creativity (chung)
dampen/sap the students' enthusiasm W(xu)
adverse circumstances/adversity 澳
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