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1Original: If we agree to say that school offers us the best book knowledge acquisition then our society offers us the best surviving techniques in a hard way
Revised: If we agree that school offers the best method for the acquisition of book knowledge, then our society offers us the best method for acquiring common sense or street smarts
Agree to say that_ʽֻҪagree that;the best book knowledge acquisitionĞthe best method for the acquisition of book knowledge(W(xu)Уo҂ṩ˫@ȡ֪R÷)ǡ ͬӺthe best surviving techniquesĞthe best method for acquiring common sense,street marks(^ǻ)oµи~Rɫ
2Original: They can spend more time studying education and communication to improve their role as a mother, wife and daughter
Revised: They can also decide to spend more time studying, education themselves, in order to improve themselves in their roles as mothers, wives and daughters
ԭstudying education and communicationfʽӢZı(yng)ԓstudyingeducating themselves~Z_˾߀}~Ώ(f)(sh)ʹãĽɫݺĸHɫ
߀УŮԲֹһܶ˶ڰĸHɫrolemother(yng)Ï(f)(sh)ʌimprove their role as a motherĞimprove themselves in their roles as mother;ͬ鱣һwifedaughterҲÏ(f)(sh)ԭwifeď(f)(sh)`(yng)ԓwives
3OriginalIf you can get the point of communication by watching TVwill you...?
RevisedIf one can learn about communicating from televisionwill you...?
ԭget the point of communication by watching TV_y⣬(yng)ԓָҕόW(xu)(x)Hlearn about communicating from television
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