иԇкܶҶe(cu)`Сиԇe(cu)c(din)҅
1 Z(y)e(cu)λ(Misplaced Modifiers)
ӢZ(y)chZ(y)ͬͬһ(g)Z(y)ھӲͬλӵĺx׃(du)@һc(din)Ї(gu)W(xu)](mi)ҕ Ҫ`1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.
betterλò(dng)(yng)ھĩ
2 Ӳ(Sentence Fragments)
ڿZ(y)Hpɽք(sh)Z(y)ĵľȫԱǕ(sh)Z(y)ͲͬˣӽY(ji)(gu)(hu)˼_(d)@Nrl(f)䌑(xi)ԺPЩa(b)f(shu)r(sh)l(f)
1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TVradionewspaper and so on.
벿“for example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on”һ(g)ľHһЩB؞~Z(y)ܪ(d)ɾ䡣
Ğ飺There are many ways to know societyfor exampleby TVradioand newspaper.
3 ҴZ(y)(Dangling Modifiers)
^ҴZ(y)ָĶZ(y)cӵ߉P(gun)ϵy磺At the age of tenmy grandfather died. @“at the age of ten” ֻc(din)ʮqr(sh)](mi)f(shu)“ l(shu)”ʮqr(sh)һmy grandfather ҂@(g)ҴZ(y)_һc(din)ȫͲôM(fi)ˡ
Ğ飺When I was tenmy grandfather died.
1. To do well in collegegood grades are essential.
вʽZ(y) “to do well in college” ߉Z(y)
Ğ飺To do well in college a student needs good grades
4~`(Misuse of Parts of Speech)
“~`”F(xin)飺~(dng)(dng)~;~(dng)~;~(dng)(dng)~õ
1. None can negative the importance of money.
negative ϵ~`(dng)~
Ğ飺None can deny the importance of money.
5ָ(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)
ָҪvǴ~cָ˻P(gun)ϵ壬ȺõĴ~һԇ@һ䣺
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
(ҽҪã?yn)Ҫİ?x@һԒ(hu)xߟo(w)_Дλl(shu)Y(ji)l(shu)(dng)҂`Ĵ~ָ(du)_˼һĿȻ@(g)ӿɸĞ飺
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
1. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
˷Q(chng)~we ͷ~yourselfָһ
Ğ飺We can also know society by serving it ourselves.