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1.һ(Disagreements)^һ²ָ^һ߀˔(sh)IJһr(sh)B(ti)һ¼~һµ
1. When one have money he can do what he want to
(һXʲôʲô)onedžΔ(sh)˷Qhave(yng)Ğhas ;ͬwant(yng)Ğwantsǵ͵^һ
Ğ飺Once one has money he can do what he wants (to do)
2 Z(y)e(cu)λ(Misplaced Modifiers)ӢZ(y)chZ(y)ͬͬһ(g)Z(y)ھӲͬλӵĺx׃(du)@һc(din)Ї(gu)W(xu)](mi)ҕ Ҫ`1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus
betterλò(dng)(yng)ھĩ
3 Ӳ(Sentence Fragments)ڿZ(y)УHpɽք(sh)Z(y)ĵ`ȫԱǕ(sh)Z(y)ͲͬӽY(ji)(gu)(hu)˼_(d)@Nrl(f)䌑(xi)ԺPЩa(b)f(shu)r(sh)l(f)
1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV radio newspaper and so on
벿for example by TV radio newspaper and so on һ(g)ľHһЩB؞~Z(y)ܪ(d)ɾ
Ğ飺There are many ways to know society for example by TV radio and newspaper
4 ҴZ(y)(Dangling Modifiers)^ҴZ(y)ָĶZ(y)cӵ߉P(gun)ϵy磺At the age of ten my grandfather died. @at the age of tenֻc(din)ʮqr(sh)](mi)f(shu) l(shu)ʮqr(sh)һmy grandfather ҂@(g)ҴZ(y)_һc(din)ȫͲôM(fi)
Ğ飺
When I was ten my grandfather died
1. To do well in college good grades are essential
вʽZ(y) to do well in college ߉Z(y)
Ğ飺
To do well in college a student needs good grades
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