簡單句其實(shí)就是寫作句式的基礎(chǔ),最簡單的情況下僅有主語和謂語兩個(gè)部分,例如Consumers shop.(消費(fèi)者購物)就可以算是一個(gè)簡單句。下面是小編為大家整理收集的關(guān)于雅思作文中的簡單句秘訣,希望對大家有所幫助。
擴(kuò)句,怎么擴(kuò)才更有效?
到上面一步為止,烤鴨們可能都會(huì)覺得非常簡單。那么下面就是考驗(yàn)大家基本功和【組裝能力】的時(shí)候了,在找到了主語和謂語的修飾詞之后,我們進(jìn)一步對句子進(jìn)行擴(kuò)句。
1) 主語加上性別
Most female consumers shop unwisely.
2)謂語動(dòng)作用并列結(jié)構(gòu)修飾
Most female consumers shop unwisely and spend too much money.
這里的shop and spend就是復(fù)合謂語結(jié)構(gòu),但是到目前為止,這仍舊是一個(gè)簡單句,我們繼續(xù)豐富它。
3) 將主語改寫成復(fù)合主語結(jié)構(gòu):
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money.
這時(shí)主語和謂語都已經(jīng)進(jìn)行了改善。但是你問還有提升空間嗎?當(dāng)然有!
4)添加介詞短語作為細(xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充說明
時(shí)間狀語和地點(diǎn)狀語,都是你的擴(kuò)句好朋友,不信我們來看:
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money in their early ages.(時(shí)間狀語)
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on luxurious purchases.(名詞狀語)
Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on souvenirs.(名詞狀語)
即使是狀語,也可以通過疊加將句子變得更加豐滿。有能力的烤鴨當(dāng)然可以通過狀語從句定語從句等等來讓句子更不一樣。
擴(kuò)句幾步走
在寫作時(shí)我們同樣需要注意詞匯搭配的問題,下面讓我們來看一個(gè)雅思寫作的常見句子:
Advertisements have influences on people.
相信所有備考過關(guān)于廣告和傳播話題的烤鴨對這個(gè)句子都不會(huì)陌生對不對,那么我們現(xiàn)在開始試著擴(kuò)句。
1) 選定要擴(kuò)句的詞匯
在這個(gè)句子中,我們先選擇advertisements,influences, people這三個(gè)詞匯,然后開始準(zhǔn)備擴(kuò)句。
2) 觀點(diǎn)添加
選好詞匯之后,就選擇搭配,但搭配的組合一定要與自己的觀點(diǎn)相符:
influences我們通常都和positive / negative 搭配;advertisements也可以分為commercials和non-profit adverts;people可以用the general public替代,所以句子如下:
Commercials and non-profit adverts have both positive and negative influences on the general public.
本周考題
Community service is helpful for both students and society.
這句話老師的擴(kuò)句版本為
Establishing community service as a compulsory part in high school education is not only helpful for students but also meaningful for whole society.