導(dǎo)讀:備考雅思,我們就是要先搞清楚雅思考官是怎么想,然后盡最大努力去滿足雅思考官的要求,才能收獲高分。這篇雅思考官關(guān)于小作文的建議,雖然不多,但是句句直指考生問題!
1、Don't copy the question for your introduction. You should paraphrase the question(i.e. rewrite it using some different words).
不要把問題照搬照抄放在你的引言當(dāng)中,要用不同的單詞重新把問題改寫一遍。
2、Don't forget to separate your paragraphs clearly.
別忘了清晰地分開每一個(gè)段落。
3、Don't forget to write a good summary/overview of the information. A quick one-sentence conclusion is not good enough. I prefer to put the overview straight after theintroduction, and I try to write 2 sentences describing the information in general. Youwon't get a high score if you don't write a good overview.
不要忘了將所得的信息很好地總結(jié)/概述一次。一句話的結(jié)論并不夠好,一般來說,我更傾向于把概述后直接放在引言后面,并用兩句話來描述信息。如果沒有一個(gè)好的概述,就不會(huì)得到一個(gè)好的分?jǐn)?shù)。
4、Don't describe items separately . You should always try to compare things if it ispossible to do so. Instead of describing 2 lines separately, compare the 2 lines at keypoints.
不要單獨(dú)地描述一個(gè)點(diǎn),如果有可能的話,嘗試去做一些對(duì)比。同樣是兩個(gè)句子,將它們的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)進(jìn)行比較說明,好過單獨(dú)地進(jìn)行描述。
5、Don't try to describe every number on a chart or graph (unless there are only afew numbers). A key skill in task 1 is being able to choose the key information anddescribe or compare it well. I usually mention around 6 or 7 numbers in my mainparagraphs.
不要用圖表或圖形來描述每一個(gè)數(shù)字(除非只有幾個(gè)數(shù)字)。在task 1中,有一個(gè)關(guān)鍵的技巧就是,選擇關(guān)鍵的信息,并很好地去描述它或者進(jìn)行對(duì)比。我通常都會(huì)在一個(gè)主要段落中,提及6~7個(gè)數(shù)字。
6、Don't spend longer than 20 minutes on task 1. Practise spending 5 minutes oneach of your 4 paragraphs. Stop yourself after 20 minutes; remember that task 2 isworth more marks.
Task 1 所花的答題時(shí)間不該超過20分鐘,好好練習(xí)如何花5分鐘的時(shí)間在每一個(gè)段落上,一共4個(gè)段落,則一共不超過20分鐘,一到時(shí)間就停止做題。記住task 2能拿的分?jǐn)?shù)更高。
7、It is better to write in regular, not very sophisticated English, than to use phrasesor structures you don’t fully understand.
比起用一些你自己都不是完全理解的短語和結(jié)構(gòu),不如用一些不是很復(fù)雜的、比較日常的英語。
8、If you need Band 6 - no need for complex sentence structure. If your goal is Band7 - then show advanced sentence structure, language and vocabulary.
如果你的目標(biāo)使6分,那就用一些不是很復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu),但如果你想哪7分,那就用一些高級(jí)的句子結(jié)構(gòu)、語言和詞匯。
9、Don’t write more than 260-265 words in IELTS Writing 2 task. Why? Not becauseyou will get lower mark, but because of these 2 reasons:1) It takes more time2) Morewords = more mistakes
在雅思task 2 寫作中,寫作字?jǐn)?shù)不要超過260-265個(gè)字。為什么?因?yàn)槟銓懽鞣謹(jǐn)?shù)低的原因不外乎以下兩個(gè):1)花更多的時(shí)間(時(shí)間不夠用)2)字?jǐn)?shù)越多,錯(cuò)誤越多
10、If you are told to cover specific points in your essay/letter - cover every point,examiners actually count them.
如果文章要求你在文章中要具體地包含某些點(diǎn),那就一一例舉出來,因?yàn)榭脊贂?huì)去數(shù)。
11、Don’t overuse connecting words (like However, Furthermore, Moreover, etc) -examiners are watching for you to do that.
不要過多使用連接詞(例如,但是,此外,等),考官就等看著你這么做,然后扣分!