話說完了，畢竟要?dú)w納一番，雅思大作文也是如此，開頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮。這樣，你就可以拿高分了!雖然雅思作文的分?jǐn)?shù)并不是取決于結(jié)尾段落，但是一個(gè)漂亮而干脆的結(jié)尾段還是會(huì)讓雅思考官眼前一亮，也會(huì)將前文出現(xiàn)的小瑕疵掩蓋掉，把大作文的分?jǐn)?shù)拿到最高。以下是專家老師根據(jù)多年的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)總結(jié)的一些黃金招式。
招式一：回答問題answer thequestion
E.g. When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I thinkit is by no means ‘ pointless’, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friendand support our way of life.
這個(gè)結(jié)尾段落明確地提出了自己的觀點(diǎn)，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全沒有用處的。
招式二：不添加新的信息not apply anynew information
E.g. Happiness is considered to be very important in life.Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.
用1句話明確自己的觀點(diǎn)，幸福很難定義，可能有兩個(gè)因素起到作用。
招式三：2-3個(gè)句子為宜 2-3 sentences are enough
E.g. Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
Finally, Ithink it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work. If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance,then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want.
2句話，作者的態(tài)度很明確，學(xué)生不可能花所有的時(shí)間去學(xué)習(xí)，否者就會(huì)完全失去對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)的興趣，所以也應(yīng)該給學(xué)生一些放松的時(shí)間。
一般在結(jié)尾段的最開始部分，考生就應(yīng)該給考官一個(gè)明確的信號(hào)詞，讓考官了解文章已經(jīng)進(jìn)入尾聲了。這里所謂的信號(hào)詞就是一些結(jié)尾段的套句：
信號(hào)詞：Finally, to sum up, inconclusion, in brief, therefore, thus, overall
句型：
1. it can be concludedthat…
2. we can findthat…
3. I think itis also important to remember that
4. the mainpoint is to make sure that
5. I believethat/ Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that
招式四：可采用以下技巧
1.總結(jié)式(重述前文)
把前文中的觀點(diǎn)再在結(jié)尾段進(jìn)行重述，但是不能重復(fù)與開頭段或者題目中的單詞。
E.g. In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?
Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of rising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole.
把solutions進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的再次描寫--父母、好的托兒所、政府的資金扶助。
2.兩分式
把文章涉及到的主題人或者物分成兩種,對(duì)其進(jìn)行分別的說明。
E.g. In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this ad completely wrong,while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?
Nevertheless,in better economic circumstances, few parents would choose to send their children out to full-time paid work. If learning responsibilities and work experience are considered to be important, then children can acquire these by having light, part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home, which are unpaid, but undoubtedly of value in children's development.
對(duì)有錢的家庭而言，家長(zhǎng)很少送小孩去做童工;如果是為了錢或者其他，可做兼職。
3.折中式
很難判斷其中到底誰占據(jù)主導(dǎo)地位，或者什么是最重要的，兩者是缺一不可的，需共同存在。
E.g. Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerfuleffects. How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person's life.
兩者是缺一不可的，天賦和后天培養(yǎng)同等重要。
4.轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比式
提出另一種群體,與之相比,會(huì)產(chǎn)生什么效果來支持自己的觀點(diǎn)。
E.g. Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of more money than people in other important professionals.Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.
把運(yùn)動(dòng)員與其他方面的工作人員進(jìn)行對(duì)比——比上不足比下有余。
總之，如果要寫出一篇好的雅思作文一定要善始善終，這才是拿高分的黃金定律，希望考生們能夠根據(jù)上文的一些建議找到適合自己的結(jié)尾方式，得到理想的成績(jī)。