雅思寫作觀點(diǎn)類表達(dá)得分要點(diǎn)

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雅思寫作觀點(diǎn)類表達(dá)得分要點(diǎn)

　　首先，我們得弄清楚幾個(gè)問題。

　　1.什么是讓步?

　　從字面意義上，就是退讓。我們知道有語言犀利風(fēng)格著稱的馬薇薇在《奇葩說》里脫穎而出，她采用的最巧妙的戰(zhàn)術(shù)其實(shí)就是------"讓步"，即先退一步說話，最后"以子之矛，攻子之盾"，其實(shí)這已經(jīng)就是辯論的最高境界了。同樣，對于我們的.雅思大作文辯論類型的文章而言，寫好讓步段無疑是我們嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)乃急嫠季S的最好體現(xiàn)。

　　2.為什么要讓步?

　　顯然，第一，讓步段除了增加文章的字?jǐn)?shù)，完成寫作任務(wù)外，更重要的是能夠增強(qiáng)文章的客觀性。通俗點(diǎn)來說，就是避免造成"劍走偏鋒"的極端印象，論證會更加全面。第二，寫得好的讓步段會讓考官眼前一亮，是奪取高分的制勝法寶之一。

　　3.如何讓步?

　　下面我們以一篇范文為例，進(jìn)行深度剖析。

　　Some people propose that smoking should be banned completely. What is your opinion?

　　Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

　　Write at least 250 words.

　　這篇文章的話題是關(guān)于是否徹底禁止吸煙。

　　1)立場：不應(yīng)該徹底禁止吸煙

　　Sample Answer 1

　　Some people suggest that the government should ban smoking completely. Indeed, smoking is harmful to health and it violates the rights and freedoms of non- smokers. However, in my opinion, smoking should not be totally banned for the following reasons.

　　開頭段：清晰地表明自己的立場

　　First, tobacco is a commodity to tax.(中心句1)It contributes much to the UK government's revenue.(分論點(diǎn)1)For example, the UK government collects enough from smokers to pay for its entire educational facilities.If smoking is banned, there will be a great loss to the government's income. In addition, more serious social problems will arise, such as unemployment,(分論點(diǎn)2)because the tobacco industry employs a lot of workers.

　　主體段1：有理有據(jù)(每個(gè)分論點(diǎn)后都有支持句)

　　理由：吸煙為稅收作貢獻(xiàn)，增加就業(yè)。

　　Second, those who strongly approve of the ban lay too much emphasis on the rights of non-smokers. They ignore smokers' rights.(中心句2)Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement and it is a kind of lifestyle. It is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers. Furthermore, for smokers, nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit.

　　主體段2：同上。

　　理由：吸煙會給吸煙者在心理上帶來一定的好處。

　　We must admit that smoking is detrimental to health.(讓步)However, the harm that smoking brings to people's health is exaggerated. As long as we smoke in moderation, it will not do great harm to our health. In history, many famous people, such as Sir Winston Churchill, smoked and enjoyed a long life expectancy.

　　主體段3：讓步段：先讓步，再反駁對方。

　　理由：指出吸煙對身體的危害性被夸大了：只要適度，吸煙不會對身體造成很大傷害。

　　To sum up, I do not agree that smoking should be completely banned. The tobacco industry makes much contribution to the national economy. Smoking brings many psychological benefits to smokers. Moreover, a complete ban of smoking will give rise to many social problems.

　　結(jié)尾段：重申觀點(diǎn)，回扣主題。

　　然后我們著重來分析下以上的讓步段。表面上作者是在承認(rèn)吸煙的壞處，先暫時(shí)退一步說話，實(shí)則"以退為進(jìn)"。指出吸煙對身體的危害性被夸大了，并提出只要適度，吸煙不會對身體造成很大傷害。即馬上回扣自己的立場------不應(yīng)該徹底禁止吸煙。

　　所以，其實(shí)讓步段并不難寫，我們從中可以總結(jié)出幾個(gè)小技巧。(假設(shè)我方是正方)

　　1.承認(rèn)反方觀點(diǎn)

　　2.對反方觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行展開

　　3.對展開的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行反駁

　　以上就是讓步段"三部曲"。

　　溫馨提示：對反方觀點(diǎn)展開句不宜太多，也就是展開句的數(shù)量不能超過反駁句的數(shù)量，否則會有"喧賓奪主"之嫌。

　　接下來，我們現(xiàn)場練兵，以支持徹底禁止吸煙為例來列列寫作提綱。

　　2)立場：應(yīng)該徹底禁止吸煙

　　Outline

　　開頭段:… Personally, smoking should be banned in the public for the following reasons.

　　主體段1：Smoking is detrimental to smoker's health(中心句1)…

　　主體段2：Smoking is a health hazard which affects not only the smoker himself ,but also all the people around him(中心句2)…

　　讓步段: …

　　結(jié)尾段: To sum up, I agree that smoking should be completely banned.

　　我們著重分析讓步段，按照我們之前說的讓步段"三部曲"操作步驟來寫。(活學(xué)活用)

　　第一步：承認(rèn)反方觀點(diǎn)(三種寫法)

　　1.Admittedly, the minor advantages of smoking should not be ignored.

　　2.Indeed, smoking is a personal habit and right to some extent.

　　3.It is partly true that smoking is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers.

　　第二：對反方觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行展開(以"Indeed, smoking is a personal habit and right to some extent . "為例)

　　Thus, some people tend to believe that the ban of smoking violates smokers' rights and freedom.

　　第三步：對展開的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行反駁(三種方法)

　　1.辯證法

　　找出反方觀點(diǎn)的邏輯漏洞進(jìn)行反駁，即"以子之矛攻子之盾"。

　　(以"Indeed, smoking is a personal habit and right to some extent."為例)

　　It sounds reasonable at first thought, but it cannot hold water if we take a close look at it. To be specific, smoking in the public also violates nonsmokers' rights and freedom since they have to suffer from passive smoking.

　　2.方案法

　　反方提出的不是唯一或者最佳途徑，我方的提議更好。

　　(以"It is partly true that smoking is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers."為例)

　　However, the stress can be alleviated by participating in healthier activities such as jogging and watching movies. Therefore, there are many others ways available to obtain great pleasure.

　　3.利弊權(quán)衡法

　　我方所帶來的好處大于反方帶來的好處。

　　(以"Admittedly, the minor advantages of smoking should not be ignored. "為例)

　　However, the merits of banning smoking in the public far outweigh those of smoking.

　　最后，小結(jié)一下干貨------反駁三步法"新鮮出爐"。

　　1.辯證法

　　It sounds reasonable at first thought , but it cannot hold water if we take a close look at it.

　　2.方案法

　　However, the problem can be solved by…

　　However, this benefit can be achieved by…

　　Although some people may argue for the idea …, I do not think it is the best and only way to ….

　　3.利弊權(quán)衡法