2016年寫作題型依然延續(xù)了一貫的考查方式:應(yīng)用文+圖表作文,非常符合英語二專碩的考查要求。具體來說,今年英語二的寫作在考查難度上正常,無論是小作文還是大作文,考查形式在之前的真題中都曾出現(xiàn)過。接下來就看一下2016年英語(二)的大作文到底考了哪些內(nèi)容?對此又應(yīng)該如何應(yīng)對呢?
48. Directions:
Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
某高校學(xué)生旅行目的調(diào)查
今年大作文依然考圖表作文,文字規(guī)定部分只字未變,同時圖表類型也延續(xù)了去年的考查形式——餅圖。根據(jù)老師在課上所講的內(nèi)容,餅圖本身反映了整體與部分的關(guān)系、及部分之間的差異性。 因此在應(yīng)用餅圖描述方式時抓住這兩點(diǎn)關(guān)鍵即可。
根據(jù)考前所講,英語二中圖表作文分成三段內(nèi)容來寫。
第一段:描述圖表。根據(jù)之前所講餅圖寫作思路,整段內(nèi)容包含5句話,直觀評價、圖表主題、主流趨勢、最大差異、過渡句。
1. 直觀評價。本句比較簡單,可以直接用準(zhǔn)備的句型,Here is a chart, simple but accurate.
2. 圖表主題。先將“某高校學(xué)生旅行目的調(diào)查”譯成英語,根據(jù)倒魚鉤翻譯法,可譯成the travelling purposes of the students in a certain university。再套用課上所講句型,即成It goes without saying that the chart records the travelling purposes of the students in a certain university, which successfully arouses our curiosity.
3. 主流趨勢。在餅圖中,主流趨勢指的就是事物的整體與部分的關(guān)系,也就是其整體體現(xiàn)。在本題中,表現(xiàn)為“學(xué)生的旅行目的多種多樣、不盡相同”。由此,套用固定句型,即是As is clearly reflected by the chart, the students’ objectives are composed of several totally different portions, including to enjoy scenery, relieve pressure, make friends, cultivate the ability of independence and others..
4. 最大差異。餅圖中此句指的就是部分與整體的關(guān)系,也就是每個部分占了整體多少比例。而且在這些比例中往往會存在最大值或最小值,那么這就是該部分與其他部分之間的差異性。本題中體現(xiàn)為 “欣賞風(fēng)景”的占比最大,為37%。那么可以表達(dá)為Especially, to admire landscape gains the percentage of 37%, which already outweighs that of all the others.
5. 過渡句。此句的作用就是總結(jié)第一段,鋪墊第二段,可以直接用固定句型Obviously, the various inclinations, clearly reflected by the chart, should be given more consideration.
以上就是該題第一段的寫作思路及語言表達(dá),接下來看第二段。第二段中需要對于第一段中的最大差異這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行原因分析,那么按照之前所講需要包含關(guān)鍵句和具體原因兩部分。
首先,關(guān)鍵句。在這一部分,需要具體點(diǎn)明原因分析的對象,也就是第一段話中的第四句,但是需要注意的是不要全句照抄,而要將意思再用不同的語言表述出來。那么套用固定句即成Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the trend that increasing college students choose to travel for the reason of beautiful scenery, but as for my part, the following two are of great value.
其次,具體原因。對于大學(xué)生們出去旅行多是為了欣賞美景這一現(xiàn)象,其原因很多,包括中國地大物博、風(fēng)景眾多,為人們的旅行提供了諸多可能性,以及大學(xué)生們?nèi)杖绽г诖髮W(xué)這一方之地的枯燥生活等等,當(dāng)然還有其他的一些原因,大家可以自由發(fā)揮,只要合情合理即可。但是要注意:考慮到語言多樣性的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),寫作時不可只用簡單的單詞或短語來銜接列舉原因,因此可以用句子來列舉,具體如下:On the top of list is that China has a huge treasure house of gorgeous and appealing landscape, which has been attracting a great number of people every year. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally acknowledged that college students stay in their universities almost every day and their life is very limited and boring, so they tend to go out to see the sight in holidays.
以上是第二段的主要內(nèi)容,接下來繼續(xù)看第三段。第三段中主要就上面分析的這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行趨勢預(yù)測,那么很明顯在接下來的很長一段時間里大學(xué)生們因?yàn)槊谰岸x擇出游的這種趨勢將會持續(xù)下去。因此,按照之前準(zhǔn)備的固定句型,可用Taking into account what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that the present situation concisely conveyed by the pie chart will sustain in the forthcoming years.
整合以上所講,今年的大作文寫作可如下:
Here is a pie chart, simple but accurate. It goes without saying that the chart records the travelling purposes of the students in a certain university, which successfully arouses our curiosity. As is clearly reflected by the chart, the students’ objectives are composed of several totally different portions, including to enjoy scenery, relieve pressure, make friends, cultivate the ability of independence and others. Especially, to admire landscape gains the percentage of 37%, which already outweighs that of all the others. Obviously, the various inclinations, clearly reflected by the chart, should be given more consideration.
Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the trend that increasing college students choose to travel for the reason of beautiful scenery, but as for my part, the following two are of great value. On the top of list is that China has a huge treasure house of gorgeous and appealing landscape, which has been attracting a great number of people every year. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally acknowledged that college students stay in their universities almost every day and their life is very limited and boring, so they tend to go out to see the sight in holidays.
Taking into account what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that the present situation concisely conveyed by the pie chart will sustain in the forthcoming years.