作文中有時會出現(xiàn)一些正面話題,需要描述圖片、闡釋圖片內(nèi)涵、作出評論。下面我們就從這三個方面來看看該如何構(gòu)思行文。第一段是開頭段,我們需要描圖,提出文章要論述的問題。具體來說,第一句宏觀描述圖畫。第二句寫該圖片反應(yīng)的主題,可以用二十個單詞的爆發(fā)力句型談該現(xiàn)象對個人的發(fā)展和社會進步的積極作用。第三句說這種現(xiàn)象所反映的問題值得人們深思。第一段主要涉及到這些方面的內(nèi)容,同學們可以根據(jù)圖片的主題酌情添加或是刪減句子。下面的模板僅供大家參考。
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述圖畫).(2) The most striking feature is(圖畫重點信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
第二自然段重點論述主題,第一句可以用一個有爆發(fā)力的主題句闡釋主題的重要性。第二句談這個現(xiàn)象的永恒的社會意義,可以用一個排比句說明只要有這個現(xiàn)象就可以讓我們不斷征服挑戰(zhàn)和競爭,并最后走向成功。第三句可以是具體的例子,談根據(jù)一項調(diào)查表明,這個積極的現(xiàn)象對人有利。第四句可以從反面談如果沒有這個積極現(xiàn)象,人們生活就憂悶,有挫折感,無前進動力,前途渺茫。第五句作總結(jié),談只有這個現(xiàn)象才能讓我們成為社會的成功者。
(1)As is symbolically depicted/shown in the set of drawings, the fact that(重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息) profoundly indicates that 主題 is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is 主題 that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulties, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for success. (3) According to a survey made by China Daily, 與主題相關(guān)的好的后果.(4)If 不這樣的話, we will live a dull and depressing life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (5)Only by 主題 can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society。
第三段為結(jié)束段落,總結(jié)全文內(nèi)容并提出建議。首句可以說無論做大事還是小事,無論做難事還是容易事,都要這個積極現(xiàn)象。第二個句子談建議讓它變的更好。第三個句子談讓它變的更好的方法,通常發(fā)揮它的好處,避免壞處。第四句談只要有這個積極現(xiàn)象就會享受一個美好,豐富和有活力的未來。
(1)From the above analysis, it can be safely concluded that in doing things whether great or small, 主題is indispensable on the way to success. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make 主題more efficient. (3)On one hand, we should raise our awareness of its significance of 主題. On the other hand, 不這樣的現(xiàn)象應(yīng)該批評. (4)Only with主題 can we embrace a glorious future.