考研專家針對輔導(dǎo)學(xué)生寫出的文章、句子、語法結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞均無太大毛病,但仍然得不到高分,主要原因是句式缺乏新意。正如前面所述,如果文章中簡單句用得太多,文章便顯得無生氣,也說明考生英語水平還待提高。所以考生在寫作時從遣詞到造句,從造句到段落,一篇文章才能完成,每個句子和段落都有一寫的規(guī)律可循,都有自己的寫作技巧。
應(yīng)屆畢業(yè)生求職網(wǎng)考研總結(jié)出下面幾種造句時要注意的幾個問題:
一、避免語法方面的錯誤
1. 結(jié)構(gòu)不完整,例如:
誤:We congratulated to him.
正:We congratulated him.
誤:Do you like listening to other people to talk?
正:Do you like listening to other talk?
2.混淆詞義,例如
誤:He raised to greet us (raise舉起)
正:He rose to greet us.(rise起立)
誤: I laid in bed all morning.(lay/laid, laid放)
正:I lay in bed all morning.(lie/lay, lain躺)
3.累贅,例如:
原句:In China, Some cities are seriously polluted, and some cities are being polluted.
改進:In China, Some cities are seriously polluted, some being polluted.
4.詞性誤用,例如:
誤:Good conditions is very benefit.
正:Good conditions are very beneficial.
誤:They don’t feel nerves.
正:They don’t feel nervous.
5. 主謂不一致,例如
誤:Statistics are a branch of mathematics.
正:Statistics is a branch of mathematics.
誤:The variety of pictures at this exhibition please me.
正:The variety of pictures at this exhibition pleases me.
6. 動名詞與不定式的誤用,例如:
誤:I hope visiting Beijing again.
正:I hope to visit Beijing again.(hope不接動名詞?)
誤:I ’d rather staying where I am.
正:I’d rather stay where I am.(would rather 要接省略to 的不定式)
二、注意句子的完整性
一個句子必須完整,就是說在意義和結(jié)構(gòu)上都是完整的,以完整的結(jié)構(gòu)來表達完整的意思,試比較
意義不完整:July is the hottest time of the year, and my birthday comes in this month.
改進: I was born in the hottest month of the year, July.
意思不完整:Mexico City is great and cosmopolitan, with a fine university and ultramodern architecture, and I hope to go there this summer.
改進:Mexico City is great and cosmopolitan, with a fine university and ultramodern architecture, I hope to go there this summer.
句子的結(jié)構(gòu)完整表現(xiàn)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)上無毛病,試比較:
結(jié)構(gòu)不完整:English is a language, language is something used to communicate with other people.
改進:English is a language which is used to communicate.
結(jié)構(gòu)不完整:A good English class is the all students can speak.
改進:A good English class is one in which all the students can speak.