自薦函的結(jié)尾用語(yǔ),試比較下列各句:
1、(a)軟弱、羞怯的: If you think I can fill the position after you
have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you. 讀完此信后倘您認(rèn)為
敝人可補(bǔ)缺,敝人愿和您一談。
(b)改寫(xiě)后(較佳): If my application has convinced you of my ability
to satisfy you, I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you, so that
you may judge my personal qualifications further.
2、(a)懷疑,不妥、不安全的: If you‘re interested, let me know
immediately, as I‘m sure and interview will convince you I‘m the man for
the job. 倘貴公司有興趣,請(qǐng)即告知,敝人深信與您面談可以使您相信,敝人適合
擔(dān)任此職。
(b)改寫(xiě)后: May I have an interview? You can reach me by telephone
at Taipei 884525 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any
evening. 可否賜予面談?您可在每天上午七至九時(shí),下午五時(shí)半至九時(shí)電884525號(hào)
。
3、陳腐的句子: Hoping you will give me an interview, I am……(我希望
您惠予面談) Anticipating a favorable decision, I wait your……(等候您的
佳音) Trusting your reply will be satisfactory, I remain(靜候滿意的答復(fù))
4、哀求式的句子,不夠完整(漏掉面談時(shí)間): Won‘t you please give me
the chance to interview your? I can be reached by calling Kenmore 69781.
懇請(qǐng)惠予面談。請(qǐng)打電話K-69781
。╞)改寫(xiě)后: May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter
further with you? My telephone is Kenmore 69781. You can reach me between
nine and five o‘clock during the day. 可否惠予面談以便進(jìn)一步商討?我的電
話是K-69781。我從上午九時(shí)到下午五時(shí)都可接通。
5、太過(guò)自信的句子: I am quite certain that an interview will
substantiate my statements Between two and four every afternoon except
Tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 731430. 我深信面談可以證實(shí)我的話。
您可在每天下午二至四時(shí)(星期二例外)打731430號(hào)電話通知我。
6、較具體有效的句子。 May I have an interview? My residence telephone
is (042) 4398. You reach me by calling that number until June 30. After
July 2, my address will be Kent House, Bretton Woods, New Hampshire. 可否
惠予面談?我住處電話為43981號(hào)。六月三十日以前我都在上址,七月二日以后,我
的新址為新罕不夏州布列登林肯特屋。