范文一
april 13,2000
p.o. box 36
biit university
beijing,china 100000
dear sir/madam:
please consider me for your sales management program. my background is one of selling ideas, concepts and programs, and of motivating myself and others to realize our potential.
attitudes predict behavior - or so goes the saying in sales. if this holds true, i am sure to be as successful in sales management as i am in my college endeavors. my unceasing optimism, self-determination and ability to set goals have allowed me to achieve academic and personal objectives.
because of my "can do" attitude, sales will provide the challenge and opportunity to continue my successful history of setting and achieving goals. please allow me the opportunity to elaborate on how my background predicts sales success. i guarantee you'll be providing your corporation with an outstanding sales management . thank you for your attention.
sincerely,
deng yun
范文二
april 13,2000
room 212 building 343
tsinghua university,beijing 100084
ms. yang:
i was referred to you by mr. zhang, a partner with your beijing office, who informed me that the shanghai office of your company is actively seeking to hire quality individuals for your auditor program.
i have more than two years of accounting experience, including interning as an auditor last year with the beijing office of cccc. i will be receiving my mba this may from tsinghua university. i am confident that my combination of practical work experience and solid educational experience has prepared me for making an immediate contribution to your company. i understand the level of professionalism and communication required for long-term success in the field. my background and professional approach to business will provide your office with a highly productive auditor upon completion of your development program.
i will be in the shanghai area the week of april 16. please call me at 136001216901 to arrange a convenient time when we may meet to further discuss my background in relation to your needs. i look forward to meeting you then.
sincerely,
cheng dan
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