求職信的第一段闡明寫信的目標(biāo),有些專家以為不宜用分詞子句。如用下面的句子做開頭,由于這樣的句子被人用得大多,顯得陳舊,失去特色。
Replying to your advertisement …… Answering your advertisement …… Believing that there is an opportunity …… Thinking that there is a vacancy in your company …… Having read your ad ……
再比擬下列三句。(1)句較差,經(jīng)由修正后(2)句顯得較適當(dāng)。
A:(1)Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager……
(2)In applying for the position of sales manager I offer my qualifications, which I believe will meet your exacting requirements.
B:(1)I believe after reading your advertisement in this mornings Journal that you have just the opportunity I am looking for.
(2)your advertisement in this mornings Journal for an adjustment manager prompts me to offer you my qualifications for this position
C:(1) Having read your advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application.
(2)In your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. Please consider me an applicant for the position. Here are my reasons for believing I am qualified for this work.
求職的在提到生機(jī)得到的待遇時(shí),可用類似的句子:
A:I hesitate to state a definite salary, but, as long as you have requested me to , I should consider 6,500 a month satisfactory. 我看待遇老是無奈定下確實(shí)數(shù)量,但既然你要我解釋,我認(rèn)為月薪六千五百元就滿足了。
B: Although it is difficult for me to say what compensation I should deserve, I should consider******a month a fair initial salary. 固然我很難說待遇應(yīng)當(dāng)是多少,我認(rèn)為每月******起薪適合。
C:I feel it is presumptuous of me to state what my salary should be. My first consideration is to satisfy you completely. However, while I am serving my apprenticeship, I should consider*****a month satisfactory compensation. 我不敢冒昧提出起薪是多少。最初我僅想如何做好工作,使您滿意。在學(xué)徒(試用)期間,月薪*****即可。
提起或要求待遇時(shí)不要過分謙虛或表示歉意,下列句子不宜使用。
A: As for salary, I do not know what to say. Would$4,500 a month be too much? 至于起薪,我不知怎么說,月薪四千五百元會(huì)不會(huì)太多?
B:Do you think I should be asking too much if I said 5000 dollars a month? 若要求月薪五千元,會(huì)不會(huì)太高?
C:You know what my services are worth better than I do . All I want is a living wage. 對(duì)我工作的價(jià)值您比我更清晰。我能夠糊口即可。
求職信的第一段說明寫信的目的,有些專家認(rèn)為不宜用分詞子句。如用下面的句子做開頭,因?yàn)檫@樣的句子被人用得大多,顯得迂腐,失去特點(diǎn)。
Replying to your advertisement …… Answering your advertisement …… Believing that there is an opportunity …… Thinking that there is a vacancy in your company …… Having read your ad ……
再比較下列三句。(1)句較差,經(jīng)過修改后(2)句顯得較恰當(dāng)。
A:(1)Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager……
(2)In applying for the position of sales manager I offer my qualifications, which I believe will meet your exacting requirements.
B:(1)I believe after reading your advertisement in this mornings Journal that you have just the opportunity I am looking for.
(2)your advertisement in this mornings Journal for an adjustment manager prompts me to offer you my qualifications for this position
C:(1) Having read your advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application.
(2)In your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. Please consider me an applicant for the position. Here are my reasons for believing I am qualified for this work.
求職的在提到盼望得到的待遇時(shí),可用相似的句子:
A:I hesitate to state a definite salary, but, as long as you have requested me to , I should consider 6,500 a month satisfactory. 我對(duì)待遇總是無法定下確切數(shù)目,但既然您要我說明,我認(rèn)為月薪六千五百元就滿意了。
B: Although it is difficult for me to say what compensation I should deserve, I should consider******a month a fair initial salary. 雖然我很難說待遇應(yīng)該是多少,我認(rèn)為每月******起薪合適。
C:I feel it is presumptuous of me to state what my salary should be. My first consideration is to satisfy you completely. However, while I am serving my apprenticeship, I should consider*****a month satisfactory compensation. 我不敢唐突提出起薪是多少。最初我僅想如何做好工作,使您滿意。在學(xué)徒(試用)期間,月薪*****即可。
提起或要求待遇時(shí)不要過分謙虛或表示歉意,下列句子不宜使用。
A: As for salary, I do not know what to say. Would$4,500 a month be too much? 至于起薪,我不知怎么說,月薪四千五百元會(huì)不會(huì)太多?
B:Do you think I should be asking too much if I said 5000 dollars a month? 若請(qǐng)求月薪五千元,會(huì)不會(huì)太高?
C:You know what my services are worth better than I do . All I want is a living wage. 對(duì)我工作的價(jià)值您比我更明白。我可能糊口即可。
求職信要施展最大的后果,語氣必需確定、自信、有創(chuàng)意而不外分夸大,如能當(dāng)時(shí)了辭退主的愛好,或其余人格特點(diǎn),依據(jù)物以類聚的原理,求職信如果能逢迎雇主的特點(diǎn),求職的人必定可以比其他人占優(yōu)勢(shì),取得面談的機(jī)會(huì)。
留神下面句子中語氣的不同:
A:I think that I should probably make a good ***** for you. 我想我可能成為貴公司的優(yōu)良的員工。
B:I am confident that my experience and references will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirements of your ***** position. 我想信我的教訓(xùn)跟別人對(duì)我的推舉可以使您充足了解我合乎貴公司*****一職的須要。
C:I recently completed a course in filing at the ***** School of Business. I am competent not only to install a filing system that will fulfill the needs of your organization, but I am also well qualified to operate it efficiently. 最近我在***********讀完*******課程,我信任不僅可以設(shè)計(jì)一套契合您的要求檔案分類體系,而且可以進(jìn)行有效的操作。
D:I feel quite certain that as a result of the course in filing which I completed at the ******** School of Business, I can install and operate efficiently a filing system for your organization. 我相信經(jīng)過我在*******學(xué)校的********課程學(xué)習(xí)之后,我可以替貴公司設(shè)置并且操作一套檔案分類系統(tǒng)。
第一句顯得語氣太弱,寫信的人有點(diǎn)羞澀的樣子。第二句有特別作風(fēng),第三句太過自負(fù),第四句,作者表現(xiàn)謙遜。
公司的老板大多認(rèn)為,重視小節(jié)的人對(duì)重大的事務(wù)也會(huì)謹(jǐn)嚴(yán)行事。一個(gè)人做人做事是否謹(jǐn)慎可以從一封求職信中看出來。別看輕了短短一封信,一封求職信可以露出出一個(gè)人的愛好、辨別力、教導(dǎo)水平以及人格特征。下列幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)便是泄漏一個(gè)人機(jī)密的地方。因而,寫信的人一定要留意。
A.紙張的選用:最好應(yīng)用品德精良,白色的信紙。信封要配合信紙的色彩。
B.書寫:求職者個(gè)別是把求職信打印出來,并加親筆簽名。簽名時(shí)字體要寫得穩(wěn)重得體,龍飛鳳舞的筆跡無疑是自尋死路。
C.格式:注釋要恰當(dāng)?shù)嘏帕性谛偶堉,格局要全文一致,不要半途轉(zhuǎn)變。
D.語法、標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫:準(zhǔn)確無誤的語法、標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫使讀信人覺得舒服,過錯(cuò)的語法或拼寫則十明顯顯,一望即知,給人留下不好的印象。尤其要注意的是,毫不可把收信人的姓名或公司名稱拼錯(cuò)了。
E.信封:信封上面的地址要完全,稱呼要合時(shí)宜,信紙的折疊要適當(dāng),大小合適信封。
F.附件:求職信通常不須附加推薦信,除非應(yīng)聘時(shí)有要求。碰到這種情況,只須附上復(fù)印件即可。另外,求職信內(nèi)附加郵票或貼好郵票寫好地址的回郵信封,逼迫對(duì)方答覆的作法不宜使用,除非對(duì)方有此要求。
需要思考的處所
寫求職信需要留意多少個(gè)方面:
A.陳述事實(shí),防止表示看法:與工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)有關(guān)的事實(shí)可以陳說出來,但不應(yīng)強(qiáng)調(diào)將給將來工作帶來怎么的利益。
B.不要批評(píng)別人:假如你要分開現(xiàn)職,能夠說出起因但不要用批駁的方法,雇主想要懂得你,而非你的工作領(lǐng)會(huì)。
C.不要過火渲染自我:你當(dāng)然認(rèn)為有才能,夠資歷才要申請(qǐng)某一職位,但不要過分夸張本人的能力或表示過分的信念,尤其不要說出與事實(shí)不符的能力來。
D.留心底薪:有的雇重要你提到愿望的待遇。你要作正確的斷定,寫出你感到可行的最低薪金。良多人應(yīng)該曉得,與其尋得一份高薪的工作倒不如找待遇尚可而有升遷機(jī)遇的工作。
通過上面的說明,希望能對(duì)你有所輔助,祝你求職勝利!