關(guān)于求職信的結(jié)尾用語(yǔ),下面也有三組例句。每一組里面(1)句較差,經(jīng)過(guò)修改后(2)句顯得比較恰當(dāng)。
A:
(1)軟弱、羞怯的:If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you.
(2)改寫后(較佳):If my qualifications meet your standards, I would be happy to speak with you in person.
B:
(1)懷疑,不妥、不安全的:If you are interested, please let me know immediately, as I'm sure an interview will convince you I'm the man for the job.
(2)改寫后:I would like to request an interview. You can reach me by telephone at Beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening.
C:
(1)哀求式的句子,不夠完整(漏掉面談時(shí)間):I would appreciate the opportunity for an interview. I can be reached by calling Beijing 12345678.
(2)改寫后:May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone number is Beijing 12345678. You can reach me between nine and five o'clock during the day.