Dear sir:
I am pleased to have this opportunity to recommend one of my capable students at the ABC University, Mr. Hung-Doe Doe, to your university's master degree program in computer science for entering class fall 1996. Through my extensive observation of him in both academic and extracurricular fields, I have come to the conclusion that Mr. Doe possesses a number of valuable qualifications that will make him an outstanding member of his graduate class.
I have had the pleasure of knowing Mr. Doe when he was under my instruction in the course of Electrical Engineering during the academic year of 1993. While attending this requirement course, Mr. Doe has left me with the impression as a bright and hard-working student who is highly motivated in his coursework. His academic integrity can be reflected by the fact that he ranked in the top 10% in the class. Unlike most of his peers, who gained knowledge merely from school lecturing, Mr. Doe has spent a great amount of effort and time on reading advanced articles and textbooks and therefore has developed a firm grasp of this subject. I am of the opinion that my class has provided Mr. Doe with a solid basic background in electronics and circuits analysis, which is valuable to his academic pursuit in computer science.
An open-minded individual who never let go any learning opportunity and is always willing to share with people his own opinions and ideas, Mr. Doe, often came to me discussing various questions and problems he encountered during his studies. I was pleased to learn of his strong interest in electronic related subjects and the most up-to-date advancement in this field. His diligence and commitment to coursework has left a deep impression on me. I have, without any doubt, come to consider him to be a highly promising student. With the intelligence and persistence that Mr. Doe has displayed, he will have no difficulty in succeeding in any academic environment
Sincerely
拓展閱讀：英語求職信的寫作要點(diǎn)
一、寫信動(dòng)機(jī)
通常求職信是針對(duì)報(bào)紙上招聘廣告而寫的。若此，信中須提到何月何日的報(bào)紙，有時(shí)工作機(jī)會(huì)是從朋友或介紹所聽來的，有時(shí)寫信人不知某機(jī)構(gòu)、公司有工作機(jī)會(huì)，毛遂自薦。不論哪一種，求職信上一定要說明寫信的緣由和目的。
因此首先應(yīng)該表明你是在何家媒體看到應(yīng)聘廣告以及所要應(yīng)聘的職位。參考例句：
1.In reply to your advertisement in today's newspaper，I respectfully offer my services for the situation。拜讀今日XX報(bào)上貴公司的廣告，本人特此備函應(yīng)征該職位。
2.Replying to your advertisement into- day's issue of the(newspaper)，I wish to apply for the position in your esteemed firm。拜讀貴公司在今日(報(bào)紙)上廣告，特此備函應(yīng)征貴公司該職位。
二、自我介紹
寫信人應(yīng)述明自己的年齡或出生年月、教育背景，尤其與應(yīng)征職位有關(guān)的訓(xùn)練或教育科目、工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)或特殊技能。如無實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，略述在學(xué)類似經(jīng)驗(yàn)亦可。參考例句：
1.For the past three years，I have been in the office of the XX Trading Co.， where I have been an accountant。本人曾經(jīng)在XX貿(mào)易公司服務(wù)三年，擔(dān)任會(huì)計(jì)工作。
2.I am twenty years of age，and have been employed for the last two years by the XX Co.，in the general clerical work of the office。我今年20歲，曾在XX公司服務(wù)兩年，擔(dān)任一般文員工作。
三、本人能力
這部分非常重要，因?yàn)檫@體現(xiàn)你究竟能為公司做什么，直接關(guān)系到求職的成功率。但是也要注意一定要用最少的文字表達(dá)最多的意思。參考例句：
1.I am able to take dictation in English and translate it rapidly into Chinese。我會(huì)英文的口授筆記，同時(shí)能立即將其翻譯成中文。
2.I have received an English education， and have a slight knowledge of Spanish.I took a Spanish course in college。本人接受英文教育，同時(shí)略通西班牙文。大學(xué)時(shí)，我修了西班牙文。
四、結(jié)尾
希望并請(qǐng)求未來的雇主允以面談的機(jī)會(huì)，因此信中要表明可以面談的時(shí)間。成功的求職信決不是虎頭蛇尾的，結(jié)尾一定要引起重視。參考例句：
1.I should be glad to have a personal in- terview and can furnish references if desired。如獲面試，則感幸甚。如需保證人，本人也可提出。
2.I request an interview，and assure you that if appointed，I will do my best to give you satisfaction。懇請(qǐng)惠予面試之榮。如蒙錄用，本人必竭盡所能，為貴公司服務(wù)，以符厚望。
五、附件
這部分視具體情況而定，如有詳細(xì)的簡(jiǎn)歷或用人單位需要的材料附在求職信中時(shí)，需要注明。參考例句：
1.You will find enclosed an outline of my education and business training and copies of two letters of recommendation。有關(guān)本人的學(xué)歷、工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)等項(xiàng)的概要，謹(jǐn)同函呈上兩件推薦函。
2.Enclosed please find a resume and a photo。隨函寄上簡(jiǎn)歷表及相片各一份。