April 13,2005

　　P.O. Box 36

　　BIIT University

　　Beijing,China 100000

　　Dear Sir/Madam:

　　Now and then corporations send out feelers for just the right type of creative person. This person must fit very specific criteria. Usually, after all is said and done, the corporation wants a business person who can manage, create and communicate. A seasoned professional who#39;s been around for a while.

　　If you#39;ve been looking for this rare combination of business savvy and design expertise, my background might interest you:

　　Ten years of working experience. Solid background in the management of creative up-and-comers.

　　Know new technologies that show instant profit, such as CAD/CAM.

　　This is but a brief summary of my abilities. And there is much, much more to share.I feel I have strong marketable skills in which you would be interested. Please contact me if you would like to hear and see more.

　　With many thanks,

　　Huang Yan

　　一般求職信常用語(yǔ)句

　　求職信的第一段說(shuō)明寫信的目的，有些專家認(rèn)為不宜用分詞子句。如用下面的句子做開頭，因?yàn)檫@樣的句子被人用得大多，顯得陳腐，失去特點(diǎn)。

　　Replying to your advertisement …… Answering your advertisement …… Believing that there is an opportunity …… Thinking that there is a vacancy in your company …… Having read your ad ……

　　再比較下列三句。(1)句較差，經(jīng)過(guò)修改后(2)句顯得較恰當(dāng)。

　　A：(1)Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager……

　　(2)In applying for the position of sales manager I offer my qualifications, which I believe will meet your exacting requirements.

　　B：(1)I believe after reading your advertisement in this mornings Journal that you have just the opportunity I am looking for.

　　(2)your advertisement in this mornings Journal for an adjustment manager prompts me to offer you my qualifications for this position

　　C：(1) Having read your advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application.

　　(2)In your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. Please consider me an applicant for the position. Here are my reasons for believing I am qualified for this work.