Dear sir,
Four years as a senior clerk in sales department of the New World Products Company have,I believe,given me the experience to qualify for the job you advertised in Thursdays newspaper.
Since 1981 I have been responsible for all office details in the administration of sales,including writing much of the correspondence.In the course of my work,I have become familiar with the various sales territories,and have also in my spare time experience of handling business problems other than my proper sphere. The years before I was employed at the New World,I was a secretary for Long Brother,an accounting firm.There I became familiar with accounting terms and procedures. I was graduated at Wah Yan College, in June 1974. I am twenty-five years of age and single. I am leaving my present position because I can use my capabilities more fully in a position with wider scope.
My present employer knows of my ambition and is helping me to find a new place. May I see you at your office to tell you more about myself and show you just how well I can do the work you require.
Yours faithfully
求職信的結(jié)尾用語,可以參考下列句子:
A:(1)軟弱、羞怯的: If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you. 讀完此信后若您認(rèn)為我還可以,我愿意和你談一談。
(2)改寫后(較佳): If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you, so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
B:(1)懷疑,不妥、不安全的: If youre interested, let me know immediately, as Im sure and interview will convince you Im the man for the job. 如果貴公司有興趣,請與我聯(lián)系,我認(rèn)為與您面談后可以使您相信,我可以勝任這份工作。
(2)改寫后: May I have an interview? You can reach me by telephone at Beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening. 我們可以面談嗎?可在每天上午七至九點(diǎn),下午五點(diǎn)半至九點(diǎn)與我電話聯(lián)系,號碼:123456。
C:陳腐的句子: Hoping you will give me an interview, I am……(我希望與您面談) Anticipating a favorable decision, I wait your……(等候您的佳音) Trusting your reply will be satisfactory, I remain(靜候滿意的答復(fù))
D:哀求式的句子,不夠完整(漏掉面談時間): Wont you please give me the chance to interview your? I can be reached by calling Beijing 12345678.請給我一個面試機(jī)會,聯(lián)系電話12345678.
改寫后: May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone is Beijing 12345678. You can reach me between nine and five oclock during the day. 能不能與您面談以便進(jìn)一步商討?我的電話是12345678。我從上午九點(diǎn)到下午五點(diǎn)都比較方便。
E:太過自信的句子: I am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements Between two and four every afternoon except Tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 12345678. 我深信面談可以證實(shí)我的話。您可在每天下午二至四點(diǎn)(星期二例外)打電話12345678通知我。