大學(xué)英語四級考試作文點評
所考話題為大學(xué)生熟悉的.非社會熱點話題：商品過度包裝。
題目：On Excessive Packaging
提綱：1. 目前很多商品存在過度包裝現(xiàn)象
2. 出現(xiàn)這一現(xiàn)象的原因
3. 我對這一現(xiàn)象的看法和建議
簡易范文如下：
首段：現(xiàn)象描述
In contemporary society, it has become a trend for many products or items to be excessively packaged. In the meanwhile, an increasing number of customers find it more expensive to purchase these goods. Taking a look around, we can find a great many examples in supermarkets: excessive packages of food, clothes and gifts.
當(dāng)今社會，商品往往被過度包裝。同時，越來越多顧客發(fā)現(xiàn)這些商品更貴了。看看我們周圍，可以發(fā)現(xiàn)超市中就有很多這樣的例子:食品，服飾和禮物都存在過度包裝。
二段：原因分析
It is evident that the causes of this phenomenon are diverse. In the first place, some customers psychological need is the root cause. These packages bring the sense of beauty, arouse peoples enthusiasm to buy, and help manufacturers to promote sale. In the second place, it is these packages that enable shops to build up a foundation for advertising. As a matter of fact, industries in mounting numbers have come to realize the necessity of packaging for sale.
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